Disclaimer: I'm not nuts. Really. I swear, when I first looked at this picture that girl had purple hair. She had her hair dyed blue to trick me! ;)
There are no Mulberry trees on
Mulberry Lane is two blocks long, beginning at
Bernice was a hermit. It had been over twenty years since the last time she ventured outside the gates. Visitors were not encouraged. She only left the house to ride her yellow
As Bernice closed the mailbox, a moving van turned into
After parking the bicycle next to her father’s 1946 Buick Roadster, which was regularly cleaned, but never driven, Bernice went through the rear door of the garage. She bent down to enjoy the fragrance of a tea rose the gardener, Klaus, planted a few weeks ago, and entered the house by way of the kitchen. Bernice ignored Phyllis, who was busy dicing onions to put in a pot of soup. The onions made Bernice's eyes sting. She thumbed through the mail, put the electric bill on the table, the newspaper under her arm, and tossed the rest in the trash can. After pouring a glass of iced tea, she went outside. She took a seat on the veranda, in the wicker chair she hated, but which just happened to provide a clear view of Gilmore House. Bernice told herself she wasn’t being nosy, merely curious.
The movers were busy unloading the truck. Bernice watched a tall man set a chair and side table on the lawn. The chair reminded her of the ultra contemporary chair her niece, Krista, gave her a few years ago for Christmas. Krista thought she was an interior designer. Instead of using the chair in her bedroom as Krista intended, Bernice tucked it away in a rarely occupied guest room. She preferred more comfortable chairs. The purple haired girl reappeared, this time carrying one of those newfangled musical boxes, with headphones over her ears. She plopped down on the ugly chair, her head bouncing up and down, presumably to the beat of the music.
The girl sat cross legged, pulled a book out of her pocket, and settled back to read. Bernice considered reading an odd activity for someone with purple hair. Bernice retired from teaching many years ago, still the teacher in her smiled. She thought kids should read more instead of watching television. Of course the girl was probably reading one of those vampire books the young people were so crazy about these days. Still, she was reading and that was a good thing.
Another car turned onto
The clock on the mantle chimed twelve. It was time for lunch. Bernice and Purple Girl, as she dubbed her, rose simultaneously. Their eyes met. Bernice went inside, while the girl walked toward a bench shaded by a sugar maple tree.
Monday of the following week, promptly at
As she looked inside the mailbox, she saw a pair of emerald green eyes, surrounded by wisps of purple hair, staring at her. Bernice took a quick step backward, grabbing her throat. Realizing this was the girl from next door, Bernice spoke through the gate, “Look here young lady, I’m an old woman. Are you trying to scare me to death?”
The girl peeked through the bars of the gate. To her credit, she looked embarrassed, “I’m sorry. I didn’t realize––I’m sorry. Are you alright?”
“Other than my heart beating faster than a hummingbird’s wings, I guess I’ll survive. What are you doing down here anyway?”
“I’ve come to see if you really do cast spells on people.”
“I see you’ve been talking to the Hellerman’s brat. If I could cast spells, I would cast one on that little monster.”
“He thinks you can. In fact, he tells me you fly on your broom when the moon is full.”
Bernice reached inside the mailbox and pulled out the newspaper and a catalog, “I do have a broom. It’s made out of straw, but it doesn’t fly. If it did, Micah’s window would be my first stop.”
“So why is he scared of you?”
“Probably because I caught him stealing my garden gnomes. I had six of them over there under that willow tree. I noticed one was missing. The next day, another one was gone. I decided to catch whoever it was, so I hid behind the tree one evening. When I saw the little thief, I reached out and grabbed him by the collar. He screamed like a banshee. I told him those gnomes were really bad little boys I turned to stone. When I let go, he took off faster than a streak of lightening. I haven’t seen him since. Good riddance, I say.”
“Don’t you like kids?”
“I don’t have much use for them.”
“Me, either. Most girls my age are just plain mean. All they want to do is gossip and make fun of anyone that doesn’t fit into their group.” the girl said.
Bernice looked past the purple hair, catching a glimpse of herself at that age. Feeling sympathetic, yet not wanting to become attached to this odd girl, Bernice climbed aboard her bicycle, and said, “Goodbye Purple Girl.”
The girl raised her arm to wave, but Bernice was already halfway up the driveway and didn’t see.
For the next few weeks, each time Bernice opened her mailbox, she saw Purple Girl peering back. Bernice would complain and tell the girl she was a pest. Yet she secretly enjoyed their conversations. Bernice taught Purple Girl about the care of roses, and told her stories about
It was a Monday morning in early August, August 5th to be exact, and even though Bernice disliked baking, that morning she baked an entire batch of peanut butter cookies. She wrapped them in red cellophane and placed them in a bag along with a bottle of milk, a bag of egg rolls ordered from
Bernice arrived at the mailbox early, spread a blanket on the ground under a shade tree, and waited for Purple Girl to arrive. As Bernice paced back and forth across the driveway, she thought about how much she looked forward to seeing the girl everyday. On Sundays, she found herself looking forward to Mondays. The bells at St. Barnabus chimed ten, eleven, and then twelve. Bernice waited. Purple Girl didn’t come.
At
Bernice stood there, looking at the invisible barrier between her comfort zone and the unknown terror beyond. She lifted her right foot to take a step forward, set it down, and lifted it again. She wanted to know her friend was okay, but her psyche wouldn’t allow her to cross the line. Exasperated, she slammed the gate, packed up the uneaten food, and rode slowly back to the house.
Out on the veranda, Bernice sat down in the chair nearest Gilmore House. Her eyes continued to search for signs of life. There were no cars, and no mother or stepfather. Bernice decided Purple Girl was spending the day with her mother. What better way for a teenager to celebrate her birthday than lunch and shopping. She was just starting to relax when she saw movement in an upstairs window. Surely the girl wasn’t alone on her birthday. Yet there she was, staring down from her window.
Bernice went inside, where she paced from the dining room, through the living room and back to the veranda where she had a good view of the neighboring house. She wondered when she had become so dependent on human contact. There were people in her daily life. Klaus and William were the groundskeepers, Phyllis cooked all her meals, and Peg and Midge cleaned. She talked to these people. Bernice wondered why, after twenty years of self imposed exile, she missed Purple Girl so much, and then she knew. She didn’t just miss taling to the girl, she missed her friend.
The yellow bicycle sped down the driveway. Bernice’s favorite blue scarf flapped in the wind, loosened, and flew through the air like a kite with a broken string, but Bernice didn’t stop to retrieve it. Bernice pedaled faster. When she reached the front gate, she stopped long enough to open the gate. Without considering what she was doing, Bernice got back on her bike and turned toward Gilmore House.
Bernice grabbed the bag of cookies out of the bicycle’s basket, and with the help of a sturdy handrail, made her way up the winding steps to the front door. She rang the bell and waited. She was about to ring the bell again when a young girl with long dark hair opened the door. Bernice couldn’t help but notice her red nose and puffy eyes. The girl reached out and took Bernice’s arm. At first Bernice resisted. At least until she recognized the girl’s smile.
“Meagan? Is that you?”
13 comments:
I loved this story about the need for friendship. I want to know more,like why the girl was left alone.
I'm with Betty. Why was she alone and what caused her to dye her hair, why was she crying...
The visual imagery in your story was superb. To me, it was set in the south, Alabama perhaps, during the warm summertime. I can see the roses and could feel the wind coming off the bicycle as it whisked by on the way to the house.
I really enjoyed this story but was a bit perplexed as to why she was alone.
Maybe the hair colouring WAS purple and maybe I called it blue cos my eyes are bad!
Betty: Thanks. And thanks for the input. I should expand the story to include more of the relationship with the mother. The mother is only interested in money, status, and her new husband. Thus, the mother was probably golfing with the country club ladies instead of spending time with her daughter on her birthday.
Jeff: See above. You are correct in your Alabama assumption. I worked for an insurance company based out of Birmingham. I spent a lot of time in Alabama during hurricane season.
Maggie: I think it's my eyes that are bad. :)
Like Betty, I want to know the whys of the girl's tears and her change of hair color, but I am very pleased they got Bernice to venture beyond her garden gate.
I skimmed this story first then came back to it (in a hurry first time round)It's a fine story of loneliness and unusual friendship and stands alone successfully.
you are an expert storyteller. you always drag me right into the story...
Oh fabulous! What happens next???? :)
Really enjoyed reading this. The characters were lovely and I couldn't help but want to throw my arms round purple girl at the end.. :-D
The funnny thing is that when I was thinking about my story the girl had purple hair and I didn't change it to blue until I put the picture in. Now that is weird.
This is a great feeling story. The reader comes to feel with the characters and wants to know more when the story ends.
You are a very good writer.
I enjoyed your story and was interested as to how purple hair girl's family moved into that house.
Lovely imagery and well developed characters. I love their friendship. Did she dye her hair black to be more acceptable to her friend?
Like the other commenters, I would like to know more about the girl and why she was alone and crying?
Thank you for a wonderful story.
Yes, indeed, this was a very quirky story, it had me gripped! I am reading it at 7 am on a sunny morning here in Scotland, and could not wait to find out what had happened.
thank you for sharing.
I also wondered about the causes for Purple Girl to be dying her hair and why she was so sad, crying on birthday etc.
I love to people watch so was totally with Bernice when the new neighbours first moved in!
Letty ;0D
Great story & no ending... Love how you used all of the photo items listed in the story prompt!
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